yohannes

please see my new porfolio

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FatJoe2

Very nice and unique flash design. Perhaps, it'd be more interesting if you add some music loop into it. I really like your navigation system, very handy

Nice site!

yohannes

Thank you very much for your opinion.i-creativ

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Jake330

nice site, but as Joe said, i'd add some loop to make the site more alive

BTW, the site is an award winner by CoolestDesigns.com, that's cool!

yohannes

You are right. I try to do better . Thank's again. Regard i-creativ

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Tigbitties

maybe a small splash of color could be added somewhere...take all those nice designs of yours and let the world see how they look

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Master007

Nice work, at least I can't do like yours

code77

So far so good. I think ur site is to monochrome. Try using some colors. Color is a very powerful design element as well as a very powerful to communicate. Every colors in desing creates a mood and meaning. I mean ur a designer, right?. You should know that. The following list below are constructive criticizm I've came up with when I viewed your site

1. on the biography section, the text "Designer" seems like its floating, u might want to anchor that by adding a design or form element. the teapot on the left, what is that? i mean it give visual balance on the right but what is the concept behind it? did u just put it there for eye candy? if so then it makes the page look busy. cause i dont know which one my eyes should rest on. if you dont want to take the teapot out, create a hierarchies or add a formal/design elements so the composition will have focal points

2. on your contacts page, it looks busy. i dont like that actual line (in design, its call implied linear form), it creates movement by leading my out out from the left side and might want to lower the opacity. I see that there's one spot color on the contacts page. why not use red on the other page or on your layout so it creates rhythm or color repetition. also u might need to take some type theory or also called typography. what if u make the prices smaller so it creates heirarchy or focal points. or what u can do is use different values (shades, light to dark) and that would create more heirarchy, or u can use another font for the prices

well, thats all i have to say about that for now. other than that, so far so good. just need to tweak it som more.








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yohannes

i-creativ is make between 1988 and 2003, for this reason maybe I prefer monochrome solution. Thank's all . I try to do better next version.
PS. I see www.code77.com, congratulation
Best regard,

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